A very nice (but really very small) map.

It's very difficult to judge this by just walking around it a bit;
there are some parts I think will be kinda "ugly" during a match (e.g. in the water) ... but that's just the life of your standard ogro/ironsnout/what-have-you ;-) ... and - in the end - there's a shiny yellow-armour to have down there, so I think that's gonna be okay.

I like the way you've secluded both the HB and QD away from the main paths a bit and must say you've worked very well with the texture set you've chosen.

Nice work.

Pretty sweet man!
Makes a really good one on one map!
Me and my friend had alot of fun on this map last night.
If you could, add another corridor or two.
Its a bit to small.
But none the less it was a great map.
Just make it a little bit bigger alright buddy?

Thanx!
:D

Good looking map, good lighting too. Layout also is nice, especially the upper part looks fine already ;)

The lower section with the water could use some more work, though, it is a bit narrow and undetailed.

Fine small map so far,

3/5

I agree, the water part is very underdeveloped - I don't really like it as it is now either.

I will definitely try to spice it up a bit and maybe extend the level a bit somewhere; I finished this up in a rush, and it deserves a second pass.

After looking at it with a clear head and some sleep, I don't really like the lighting (it isn't realistic - those tiny lights on the side don't look enough to light up the whole map like they are doing now), but I guess I'll leave that for a rainy day project, if ever. :)

Thanks for the comments!

I added another area going from the back near the health boost and former jumppad which leads around to the water area under the pipes - hopefully this will make it roomy enough to be a bit more playable. I also changed the floor texture on the middle area; not sure if this is actually an improvement, but that red texture was begging to be used somewhere. :P I've not really playtested this at all, so any comments on how it goes against actual human opponents would be appreciated.

Ok I got another suggestion...

The new part you added is good...

But its too linear.

Where you have the main ramp thingy (which you had in the first version) you should have some stairs/ramp or some sort leading into the main section of it.

I hope you understand what I mean here...

Also make the ledge with the rocket, Green Armour and health accessible without the need to rocket/rifle jump.

Also I would swap the yellow armor and green armor positions.

Anyways the map deserves a five outta five at this point.

Add that stuff I suggested and you can make it a 6 outta 5 :D

-FREAK-